I Seem to Often Overwater
Haiku3 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
I liked this entry not just because of your talent, but my favorite play is "The Fantasticks" and in it, a character, a father, speaks about the dangers of overwatering plaints. Thanks for posting!
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I liked this entry not just because of your talent, but my favorite play is "The Fantasticks" and in it, a character, a father, speaks about the dangers of overwatering plaints. Thanks for posting!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
Comment from RodG
Oh, nothing saddens me more than to see a plan die from overwatering. I am guilty of doing so all too often. Orchids are so sensitive and seem to thrive on little attention. Your poem makes this point quite clear. My wife does not let me water her orchids anymore. Rod
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Oh, nothing saddens me more than to see a plan die from overwatering. I am guilty of doing so all too often. Orchids are so sensitive and seem to thrive on little attention. Your poem makes this point quite clear. My wife does not let me water her orchids anymore. Rod
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I feel the same! I am slowly getting better but I still do it on accident occasionally! Thank you for the review :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Haiku Poem writing prompt. A creative way to describe orchids and very accurate. I especially liked the last line. Treat them nice and you will be throwing them in the trash soon. Ignore them and give them very little care and you will be rewarded. Nice job.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the Haiku Poem writing prompt. A creative way to describe orchids and very accurate. I especially liked the last line. Treat them nice and you will be throwing them in the trash soon. Ignore them and give them very little care and you will be rewarded. Nice job.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! I definitely found this lesson out the hard way ;(
