Birthday Surprise
Just a bit of silliness before going to bed7 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
LoL poor guy. ... that's a lot to take in. Good story and ending. It could be a short flash fiction movie
You are very creative and talented. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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LoL poor guy. ... that's a lot to take in. Good story and ending. It could be a short flash fiction movie
You are very creative and talented. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your kind review, Marival.
Espero que pases un buen finde.
Comment from Debra White
Hey Maria :)
I really enjoyed reading this!
I love the dialogue and the content is great - I particularly enjoyed the unexpected and witty twist.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Hey Maria :)
I really enjoyed reading this!
I love the dialogue and the content is great - I particularly enjoyed the unexpected and witty twist.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Wow! It's nice to see you here. Have you posted anything?
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Not since 3rd March! x
Comment from Ric Myworld
ROFL! Well, this isn't anything that I've have ever expected to come from you, and I'm probably the only person who wouldn't find it sad the person is dying. I'm sure there is a deeper story as to where this story came from. Wish I had a six. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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ROFL! Well, this isn't anything that I've have ever expected to come from you, and I'm probably the only person who wouldn't find it sad the person is dying. I'm sure there is a deeper story as to where this story came from. Wish I had a six. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for your fun review, Ric.
You know, I'm not all sugar and spice. LOL.
Have a nice Saturday.
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Well, I'm figuring if you were all sugar and spice you probably wouldn't be communicating with me. LOL. Have a wonderful weekend!
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LOL! I don't know you in person, but you sound like a great guy. And you made me laugh, just what I needed now. Grading is so boring!
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And you sound like a great gal! It's always nice to share a laugh or two. :-)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh Maria, this actually sums up my own stress recently trying to make headway on the phone and going through endless security, only to get absolutely nowhere! Your dialogue excellently portrays these two characters at odds with one another and never to meet half-way. I don't know whether to laugh or cry. But your imagination is a delight! Well done. Debbie x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Oh Maria, this actually sums up my own stress recently trying to make headway on the phone and going through endless security, only to get absolutely nowhere! Your dialogue excellently portrays these two characters at odds with one another and never to meet half-way. I don't know whether to laugh or cry. But your imagination is a delight! Well done. Debbie x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for reading, Debra. I don't know why, but most of the things I write tend towards the dark side.x
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was an outstanding piece of silliness in my opinion. Such a shame you didn't enter it for the next dialogue only contest - it would have done well there I guess, the dialogue was spot on, and the story great. kay
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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This was an outstanding piece of silliness in my opinion. Such a shame you didn't enter it for the next dialogue only contest - it would have done well there I guess, the dialogue was spot on, and the story great. kay
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much, Kay. It's quite a grey day here and I have a lot of grading to do, so I have to tell you your yellow star made my day.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a little bit of silliness. I agree, but it was a fun read, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. This is written though. May you have a blessed evening and may you have a happy happy Easter. Patricia .
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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This is a little bit of silliness. I agree, but it was a fun read, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. This is written though. May you have a blessed evening and may you have a happy happy Easter. Patricia .
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Patricia. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to answer.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
oh my! That got dark quickly lol I couldn't figure out where it was going and then all of a sudden I thought of that movie with Brad Pitt playing Death amd he falls in love wiht Anthony hopkins daughter...well anyway, I could picture Brad being that waiter. lol fun story. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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oh my! That got dark quickly lol I couldn't figure out where it was going and then all of a sudden I thought of that movie with Brad Pitt playing Death amd he falls in love wiht Anthony hopkins daughter...well anyway, I could picture Brad being that waiter. lol fun story. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I'll have to watch that film again, now that you mention it. I remember I loved it. What was the title again. Mr Black something or other?
Thanks for reading.
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i just looked it up. Meet Joe Black is the title. Good movie. But of course anything with a young Brad Pitt in it is good. lol
