Wary
Once bitten, twice shy2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our hearts are delicate and once broken we are wary of losing our heart to another who may cause us harm. I can identify with your words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Our hearts are delicate and once broken we are wary of losing our heart to another who may cause us harm. I can identify with your words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A very good attempt at the 1-6-1 writing prompt. Please make a quick revision before time runs out. All three lines need to rhyme. Here is the example given:
Breath
Stolen by crystal meth
Death
Let me know when it's done and I will update this review and change the stars. Good luck.
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A very good attempt at the 1-6-1 writing prompt. Please make a quick revision before time runs out. All three lines need to rhyme. Here is the example given:
Breath
Stolen by crystal meth
Death
Let me know when it's done and I will update this review and change the stars. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024