Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Good spoof on that former Prez. Yes, he has a lot of fat to sit on. Do like your rhyme scheme, especially your concluding thought.

Seriously, there are too many people in the country who believe in his rhetoric and garbage talk.

His tweets are often insulting to all of us. Unlikely, I would pay any money to see him spout off if he was actually being paid to do stand-up comedy. IMHO, he is a big joke.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024

thanks a lot. I think his comedy routine is getting old and tired. His Don Rickles political insult comic routine was funny for a while but is beyond the sell by date

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh dear, not a fan of Trump then? The battle no doubt will continue until a winner is determined and I fear for the aftermath of this race for the Whitehouse as I expect there will be rioting in the streets of America, a poignant post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

I loved this Haiku. It is true in every aspect with a dash of humor added in for good measure. Put it on a tshirt lol Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024

ah the fine print said that for this contest it did not need to be precise but i can fix that thanks for noticing

reply by Marilyn Hamilton on 28-Mar-2024

Oh well if I an wrong I apoligize. I didn't read the fine print and just went by normal haiku format. I'm sorry if I misspoke. Good luck in the contest

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024

oh i fixed it anyway