Steadfast
A Kimo haiku3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this, Sally. So much in life is fleeting--beauty, time, even wind. Rather, set your sights on the mountains. Sounds Biblical, but not necessarily limited to Biblical interpretations. The symbolism is strong and seems to be perfect for a Japanese poem that draws meaning from nature.
Hope you had a wonderful Easter, my friend.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I like this, Sally. So much in life is fleeting--beauty, time, even wind. Rather, set your sights on the mountains. Sounds Biblical, but not necessarily limited to Biblical interpretations. The symbolism is strong and seems to be perfect for a Japanese poem that draws meaning from nature.
Hope you had a wonderful Easter, my friend.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I?m glad this one resonated with you. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your haiku! Yes, the mountain stays the same even as other natural events and human history keeps changing constantly. Your poem has that definite haiku feeling.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Loved your haiku! Yes, the mountain stays the same even as other natural events and human history keeps changing constantly. Your poem has that definite haiku feeling.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Yes, there is security in knowing some things don?t change, as others ebb and flow in life. Thanks for sharing your insights. Much appreciated.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I had never heard of a Kimo poem before. This was lovely. Nice descriptions. The artwork that accompanies the iem adds to the presentation. Good job.
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I had never heard of a Kimo poem before. This was lovely. Nice descriptions. The artwork that accompanies the iem adds to the presentation. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
