Do I really have to work today
Villanelle2 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Very nicely done. The semi repeating line is clever.
You need to indicate in your author n otes where the picture comes from. We have all had those days.
Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Very nicely done. The semi repeating line is clever.
You need to indicate in your author n otes where the picture comes from. We have all had those days.
Good work. Karen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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It was picked from the sister site FanArt.
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:-)
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Don't forget to vote, for me preferably
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment here and I love the form, but the iambic metre is missing here so the flow is rather bumpy, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed the sentiment here and I love the form, but the iambic metre is missing here so the flow is rather bumpy, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you, never really mastered Iambic meter.
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Don't forget to vote, for me preferably
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Will do x
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Hello, it is really easy for me to say I don't get iambic pentameter. therefore I don't do it. What would be hard is to watch couple of you tube videos and then go over my work which has been highlighted as lack and rework them. So that is what I did. I still find it difficult so would you please go over it for me and check if it now works. I really appreciate the fact you commented, although I may not have sounded like it. I would also appreciate the help.
