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Lincolnshire Life

A cautionary tale using place names

9 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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I did not know how narrow the streets are in England, until I traveled there and had to drive the roads. There is an interesting puzzle for the reader as they puzzle over some of the dialect and yeah are able to put it together and understand the account.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Thank you, have you voted?
Comment from Spitfire
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This made me think of Lewis Carrol's 'T'was brillig and the slithy tobes' . This could be a lesson on how to figure out the meaning of a word using context clues. Clever.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Thank you, I was thinking of Carrol when I came up with the idea. Did you vote?
Comment from zanni
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This is very funny and creative. I am impressed with how many place names you managed to incorporate. I think we should bring some of them into daily use. It makes me think of Spike Milligan. The end makes me think of Benny Hill or Frankie Howard.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, don't forget to vote.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi there, Those are really strange names for sure. It's amazing to imagine how they became into being. There will be a story behind each name. All the best of luck, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Thank you. Feel free to vote if you haven't already.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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I like the way you have creatively taken words and names with distinct meanings and repurposed them in a way that has additional unique significance. This whole piece has the flavor of a well baked colloquial pie. L O L

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
    Thank you, please give me vote if you can.
reply by Dr. Nad on 31-Mar-2024
    I happily voted for "Lincolnshire life" as soon as I finished the review! :-)
reply by Dr. Nad on 31-Mar-2024
    I happily voted for "Lincolnshire life" as soon as I finished the review! :-)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
    thank you
Comment from Julie Helms
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Those are such totally awesome names! I think you cleverly weaved them together into a story, leaving a bit to the reader's interpretation. I know little of England's geography but the picture reminds me of the homes I saw when I visited the Cotswolds.
Great entry for the contest!
Julie

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, I it brought back happy memories.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Please remember to vote.
Comment from Derek10644
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Wow, you are super talented at poetry. I really can't wait to see what you have next because that was a really good poem. I give you 10 out of 10. Good luck on your next entry. Can't wait to hear from you again soon.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Thanks, it was prose in my mind, but I would struggle to see the difference prose and a prose poem.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Please remember to vote.
Comment from royowen
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I've been to England on several occasions, and I love the quirky names, the funniest was South Piddle, mind you I don't know where North, East of was, this is brilliant my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    I think there is also a Piddle in the hole. A little known fact for you JRR Tolkien was a great fan of maps; he got the name Bag End from the village I mentioned Bag Enderby.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Feel free to vote for me later, thanks.
reply by royowen on 30-Mar-2024
    Well done
reply by royowen on 30-Mar-2024
    Love Tolkien
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is clever and interesting and all those names are very unusual and typically English and I loved your inventive story to incorporate all these wonderful names, much enjoyed a fine post for the contest and a winner for me, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Don't forget to vote. ;)
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 30-Mar-2024
    I won?t x x x