Scream!
What do you do when you can't do anything else?2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this narrative seems written to convey the fear or terror the main character felt after being followed home by a stranger, who was armed with a knife. The reader can guess the crime that is about to happen, but the t-shirt.
notes:
"I get it every night"!
"I get it every night!"
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Hmm, this narrative seems written to convey the fear or terror the main character felt after being followed home by a stranger, who was armed with a knife. The reader can guess the crime that is about to happen, but the t-shirt.
notes:
"I get it every night"!
"I get it every night!"
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review! Not sure what your notes were trying to convey though. Were you focusing on the placement of the exclamation point?
Comment from jessizero
This story was harrowing and intense! You told the story well in just 100 words. I have been too afraid to speak or pray aloud. You captured that feeling well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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This story was harrowing and intense! You told the story well in just 100 words. I have been too afraid to speak or pray aloud. You captured that feeling well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review!
