Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This tyburn, Eye of the Storm, has the proper formatting and takes the reader to the open sea and meets the rage of the rushing waves which are used to winning these struggles.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Boogienights,

Congrats on your win in the Tyburn poetry and on your milestone 1000 post. Your Tyburn poem is excellent and expertly meets all the requirements of this challenging poetry form. You are a highly skilled and talented writer and poet. Your masterfully written poems are always captivating, thought provoking and real.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024

Thank you, you honor me with this wonderful review...it means a lot. ❤️

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Being in an open boat in a storm would be anybody's worse nightmare and the alliteration in your poem brings the terror to life here, good luck with the contest and congratulations on your 1000th post, well done, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thank you for reading, it's appreciated. :)

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Congratulations on post 1000! That's an amazing accomplishment! :-)

This is a great descriptive piece. I could feel myself in that precarious position with wind and waves rocking the boat.
Well done!
Julie

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

I like that. it is good. Congratulations on your 1000th post and a good one at that. Good luck in the competition, not heard of this form until yesterday and I hope to read more now. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thank you, l appreciate this great review. :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Congratulations on your milestone post! 1000 is quite an accomplishment! This was a good poem to use for this post. I was impressed with your use of the format. I especially liked "knowing pain." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024

Thanks so much! I can't believe l've written so many poems...l appreciate you reading my poems. :)

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

I like your little poem although I believe you haven't quite followed the instructions exactly - the repeated words from the start should be placed later in the last two lines as in the example given. You may want to consider fixing that for the sake of the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024

Thanks, l actually just caught that and changed it. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)