Raindrops
A Lune Poem 5-3-517 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I had to think about it, but it is true. Airborne moisture. Quite often you give my brain a workout. Thank you. Good writing will do that. Have a wonderful week. Karen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I had to think about it, but it is true. Airborne moisture. Quite often you give my brain a workout. Thank you. Good writing will do that. Have a wonderful week. Karen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Karen, yes, sometimes the mind works in funny ways, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Comment from Krissso
I love this poem. Thank you.
Here is my poem per your instruction.
I like rereading both of them. they're a good pair. thank you. great job.
Detached but then it
dawned on me
just after sunset.
-ko
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I love this poem. Thank you.
Here is my poem per your instruction.
I like rereading both of them. they're a good pair. thank you. great job.
Detached but then it
dawned on me
just after sunset.
-ko
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Wow! thank you for your excellent comments and exceptional stars, your 5-3-5 is amazing, I went into your portfolio but could not find it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nice LUNE poem for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest may you have a wonderful day. May God's blessing be on your life. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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This is a nice LUNE poem for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest may you have a wonderful day. May God's blessing be on your life. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Patricia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jessizero
This poem was filled with hope, at least that's how I read it. I enjoyed your author's notes, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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This poem was filled with hope, at least that's how I read it. I enjoyed your author's notes, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
A pithy entry for your Lune contest entry.
Do like your coloring scheme for this post. I too have used your illustrator for several of my own posts.
Nicely done!
Mark
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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A pithy entry for your Lune contest entry.
Do like your coloring scheme for this post. I too have used your illustrator for several of my own posts.
Nicely done!
Mark
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Mark, I'm not sure if I have the right Idea about the lune form, I've only written a few, though enjoy learning, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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P.S.
I have often seen that Lune poems are aligned flush left to replicate a ?moon? look. Like Haiku, 5-7-5 may be shorter in length, but usually as short-long-short syllabled lines.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery with the raindrops and clouds.
-A good contrast with fall and ascend.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery with the raindrops and clouds.
-A good contrast with fall and ascend.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome.
Comment from June Sargent
Very inspirational words that remind us of the struggles we might face in life. But ultimately can transform us into a new and better version of ourselves. Nice entry!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Very inspirational words that remind us of the struggles we might face in life. But ultimately can transform us into a new and better version of ourselves. Nice entry!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ah, the precipitation cycle!! I remember that from elementary school science class! If this poem had been around back then, think of the time it could have saved all of us! Concise, precise, and mystifying: everything Science should be!
Good luck on Voting Day with this lovely Lune! xo
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Ah, the precipitation cycle!! I remember that from elementary school science class! If this poem had been around back then, think of the time it could have saved all of us! Concise, precise, and mystifying: everything Science should be!
Good luck on Voting Day with this lovely Lune! xo
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, I haven't written many of these, so it was fun to try again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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It's fun to do that. I think it's what this site is made for. Spread those wings!! xo
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This is an interesting choice of pictures, and the subject is up my alley as I was a weather-geek (Aerographer) in the United States Navy. Drops of water, for any questioning how do they rise, check the science how hail vary in size.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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This is an interesting choice of pictures, and the subject is up my alley as I was a weather-geek (Aerographer) in the United States Navy. Drops of water, for any questioning how do they rise, check the science how hail vary in size.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Tom, that would have been a great and very interesting career, and like you I am a bit dubious about the picture, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark Jackson
I like it as a whole it works really well. The image although abstract has a watery feel, the black background and white text is classic. The words are short but leave you thinking for far longer than it takes to read them. Yet is used as a conjunction here although it could also act as a verb (neverthe less) such a tiny word doing such a big job.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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I like it as a whole it works really well. The image although abstract has a watery feel, the black background and white text is classic. The words are short but leave you thinking for far longer than it takes to read them. Yet is used as a conjunction here although it could also act as a verb (neverthe less) such a tiny word doing such a big job.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Mark, for your excellent and understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
