Black and White blues!
Magpies are very territorial.2 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
There's something a little odd about your formatting here. Did you deliberately start each new sentence on a new line?
Your story is OK, although I suspect with a little thoughtful editing you could have increased the tension, even given the restriction of the word limit.
Good luck.
Steve
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There's something a little odd about your formatting here. Did you deliberately start each new sentence on a new line?
Your story is OK, although I suspect with a little thoughtful editing you could have increased the tension, even given the restriction of the word limit.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Birds do attack when they think their nexts are threatened. Your story is familiar and I am glad your Jenny was able to take shelter from this Magpie, love Dolly x x x
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Birds do attack when they think their nexts are threatened. Your story is familiar and I am glad your Jenny was able to take shelter from this Magpie, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
