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a chapter of fear

a chapter of knowledge

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Comment from bonespur
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I definitely grasped the message that fear is the major point the writer was trying to convey. Me personally, I found the flow of the poem hard to read. I'm new at this so I might not understand the rules associated to each writing. But I did like how one thing lead to another. Good job

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

Comment from Mark Jackson
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That is very interesting and compelling read. I am interested to know how you decide which words you can use and which you cannot. I assume you are talking about Middle English so 12 century up until the 17th century Renaissance period. Interesting stuff and a good read.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

Comment from hullabaloo22
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It's really refreshing to come across writing that is not constrained by rules of grammar and such. It gives the reader a freedom to read and interpret in their own way.
I have to agree with all of the last line of the first stanza.
Your chosen picture was a perfect accompaniment to the piece.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024