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Autumn tree

3-5-3 poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem on nature
and autumn's wonderful display of colors
I don't think you need the apostrophe in line one (fall maples is the plural)
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Thank you dear Robert <3
Comment from RodG
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A postcard image of golden apple leaves strewn by the wind in Fall. Nicely done in only eleven syllables. One suggestion for line 2: WIND-ABANDONED leaves. Rod

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Thank you dear Rod <3