Creation of God
Breathtaking orange hues10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Creation of God, has the proper formatting and captures the magnificent sundown experience which seems a bit too good to be something that could happen again.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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This 3-5-3, Creation of God, has the proper formatting and captures the magnificent sundown experience which seems a bit too good to be something that could happen again.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you
Comment from BermyBye50
Joanne,
Congrats on your win in the Nature 3-5-3 contest. Your title of your poem Creation of God speaks to the essence of his presence in our daily lives and is well reflected in your words. The story you tell with your words is creative, and profound and flows easily when read. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Joanne,
Congrats on your win in the Nature 3-5-3 contest. Your title of your poem Creation of God speaks to the essence of his presence in our daily lives and is well reflected in your words. The story you tell with your words is creative, and profound and flows easily when read. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much Eugene 🙂
Comment from Teri7
I love looking at God's beauty in the sky and on the earth. He is an amazing God that is so good to us with all the beauty we see each day. This is a great 3-5-3 poem you have penned and congratulations on your win my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I love looking at God's beauty in the sky and on the earth. He is an amazing God that is so good to us with all the beauty we see each day. This is a great 3-5-3 poem you have penned and congratulations on your win my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much Teri for your exceptional review !
Comment from M_Esther
What a perfect little poem with a beautiful image to match. Love this. I keep thinking that telephone pole is a cactus and that it's a picture of the Arizona desert. I'm glad it did well in the contest! This sunset is indeed majestic and glorious.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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What a perfect little poem with a beautiful image to match. Love this. I keep thinking that telephone pole is a cactus and that it's a picture of the Arizona desert. I'm glad it did well in the contest! This sunset is indeed majestic and glorious.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The thought is exquisite. The photo divine, and I like the message you provide though I suggest maybe "God's artwork for the last line.
Good luck.
I wanted in but no space for mine so I posted it ala carte
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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The thought is exquisite. The photo divine, and I like the message you provide though I suggest maybe "God's artwork for the last line.
Good luck.
I wanted in but no space for mine so I posted it ala carte
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from kahpot
This is beautiful and so very true; God does create so many wonderful gifts for us to enjoy, an excellent short poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This is beautiful and so very true; God does create so many wonderful gifts for us to enjoy, an excellent short poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Bryce 1
Good stuff. When taken by a sunset, I often see myself somewhere in all of it. I am a conceited person after all. i know the good lord has a perfect finished plan and every sunset is a reminder of the gears of that plan turning without fail and with such utter smoothness.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Good stuff. When taken by a sunset, I often see myself somewhere in all of it. I am a conceited person after all. i know the good lord has a perfect finished plan and every sunset is a reminder of the gears of that plan turning without fail and with such utter smoothness.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Sally Law
This is a breataking lune poem! A gorgeous orange sunset crowns your poem perfectly. Divine! Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This is a breataking lune poem! A gorgeous orange sunset crowns your poem perfectly. Divine! Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much Sally 🙂
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautiful entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt. The picture is amazing. The addition of a black background with orange text really adds to the presentation. Good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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A beautiful entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt. The picture is amazing. The addition of a black background with orange text really adds to the presentation. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Simple but true and majestic also. Beautiful! Excellent imagery and vivid descriptions. Well done. I enjoyed reviewing this. Thank you for sharing!.
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Simple but true and majestic also. Beautiful! Excellent imagery and vivid descriptions. Well done. I enjoyed reviewing this. Thank you for sharing!.
Alex
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much