2024 Japanese Poetry
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8 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has good sensory appeal. I like your word play on ... dollars. Great photo choice. Your message is powerful. Well done.
Xo. M
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem has good sensory appeal. I like your word play on ... dollars. Great photo choice. Your message is powerful. Well done.
Xo. M
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aww... sad to see hungry people...
and most just don't care
a great naani - with a haiku essence
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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aww... sad to see hungry people...
and most just don't care
a great naani - with a haiku essence
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
I appreciate your time and kind review.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark Schardine
In any place with great wealth we can expect to see poverty as well. We know it happens, and yet we cannot think of how to improve matters. We start by opening our eyes.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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In any place with great wealth we can expect to see poverty as well. We know it happens, and yet we cannot think of how to improve matters. We start by opening our eyes.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark
I appreciate your time and kind review.
gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When I think of the boardwalks on the beaches, I've been to, to be perfectly honest, I've never thought of the human people. I recall seeing any there. I have seen them in many other places. I am going to be cautious the next time and see. If so, I will share with them.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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When I think of the boardwalks on the beaches, I've been to, to be perfectly honest, I've never thought of the human people. I recall seeing any there. I have seen them in many other places. I am going to be cautious the next time and see. If so, I will share with them.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Such a sad poem. There are people living like this. I love the places that have friend meals. People will pay for a meal and the restaurant will forward that meal to someone down on their luck. Beautiful tradition. I love the double meaning behind the sand dollars. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Such a sad poem. There are people living like this. I love the places that have friend meals. People will pay for a meal and the restaurant will forward that meal to someone down on their luck. Beautiful tradition. I love the double meaning behind the sand dollars. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. I never heard of friends.... great idea.
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Comment from RJ Heritage
The words ring true to the reality of the homeless.
It is something we see everyday. Perhaps in such States as California more tgan others.
Heartfeltand sobering words in your Naani.
RJ
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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The words ring true to the reality of the homeless.
It is something we see everyday. Perhaps in such States as California more tgan others.
Heartfeltand sobering words in your Naani.
RJ
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Maybe the Snack Shack worker will have a kind heart and collects sand dollars. Hopefully, the homeless man will get a meal. Often they know when to go through the garbage when the expired time of food has to be thrown away...
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Maybe the Snack Shack worker will have a kind heart and collects sand dollars. Hopefully, the homeless man will get a meal. Often they know when to go through the garbage when the expired time of food has to be thrown away...
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Gretchen told me you can buy a "friend' meal for someone who needs it.
Love
Marival
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That's a good idea!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes, moments like these we have to feel for the homeless people, as what we take as a treat, they would just love to be able to eat, a wonderful Naani poem, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Excellent, yes, moments like these we have to feel for the homeless people, as what we take as a treat, they would just love to be able to eat, a wonderful Naani poem, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym.
Gypsy hugs