Stray Goat On A Risky Hill
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Comment from Daylily
This is a very good beginning to the story. It grabs interest because of the mystical clairvoyant aspect with the dream. Also, I think goats are wonderful and playful animals. How can you go wrong? -- Looking forward to Chapter 4, my friend. :-)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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This is a very good beginning to the story. It grabs interest because of the mystical clairvoyant aspect with the dream. Also, I think goats are wonderful and playful animals. How can you go wrong? -- Looking forward to Chapter 4, my friend. :-)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Please forgive the delay. I fell so far behind. Thanks for kind words. Just give me a yell if you feel I have ignored you. I would never do that!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Computers have a strange way of misplacing things. LOL Thank you for sharing this. I'd forgotten about the story. It's good please continue it.
Geiger's tone sharpened. "For the record!" (sharpened, & and each person speaking gets their very own paragraph)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Computers have a strange way of misplacing things. LOL Thank you for sharing this. I'd forgotten about the story. It's good please continue it.
Geiger's tone sharpened. "For the record!" (sharpened, & and each person speaking gets their very own paragraph)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Please forgive the delay. I fell so far behind. Thanks for kind words. Just give me a yell if you feel I have ignored you. I would never do that!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Jim,
This is a really well written chapter about a cowboy, Wendigo, and something he has seen in a dream about a kidnapped girl. Seeing a birthmark only a few know about, Mars, figures there is something he knows that can help find the girl, so he arrests him.
I'll have to go back and check the other chapters out.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Hi Jim,
This is a really well written chapter about a cowboy, Wendigo, and something he has seen in a dream about a kidnapped girl. Seeing a birthmark only a few know about, Mars, figures there is something he knows that can help find the girl, so he arrests him.
I'll have to go back and check the other chapters out.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Once again, apologies for being so tardy! I need and appreciate your input!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written. Error-free as near as I can tell.
From what I understand, most people do not dream in color.
Can you draw red in a charcoal work?
Good luck with the book.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Well written. Error-free as near as I can tell.
From what I understand, most people do not dream in color.
Can you draw red in a charcoal work?
Good luck with the book.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Once again, apologies for being so tardy! I need and appreciate your input!
