Life of a Tear
1-6-1 Poem a refection on greif.3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh, now this one is VERY clever!! I like the way your brain and talent with words did a fabulous job with this poetic form! Clever, clever, clever!! I hope it takes you right to the Winner's Circle. (I love the pic you found, too; picture PERFECT!) xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Oh, now this one is VERY clever!! I like the way your brain and talent with words did a fabulous job with this poetic form! Clever, clever, clever!! I hope it takes you right to the Winner's Circle. (I love the pic you found, too; picture PERFECT!) xoxo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I am so pleased you liked it.
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So much that I voted for it, in fact!!
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your poem. You got the syllable count right for the contest, and each line rhymed as it should have. I like that you called it the trail of a tear. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed your poem. You got the syllable count right for the contest, and each line rhymed as it should have. I like that you called it the trail of a tear. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem touches my soul. Painful emotion escapes through tears. Something none of us want to feel. Your picture adds to your words. Together they are awesome. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Your poem touches my soul. Painful emotion escapes through tears. Something none of us want to feel. Your picture adds to your words. Together they are awesome. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you, voting is not for a while yet.
