A Celebrity Couple
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Mark.
-A well written tanka with a good topic.
-You set the scene very well in the first two lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good closing lines as a cute lady
decides to get between this couple
causing a public scandal.
-Very well done. I always like how
your tankas tell stories.
-I wrote one recently about the
movie "Maestro" if you want to check it out.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Mark.
-A well written tanka with a good topic.
-You set the scene very well in the first two lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good closing lines as a cute lady
decides to get between this couple
causing a public scandal.
-Very well done. I always like how
your tankas tell stories.
-I wrote one recently about the
movie "Maestro" if you want to check it out.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
It's a set up! FAKE NEWS! sorry, I digress. This is a clever poem done in the Tonka format. The artwork adds to the presentation. thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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It's a set up! FAKE NEWS! sorry, I digress. This is a clever poem done in the Tonka format. The artwork adds to the presentation. thanks for posting.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka-form, A Celebrity Couple, has the proper formatting and brings the dirty laundry out to dry next to the flambe from the bonfire of the vanities.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This tanka-form, A Celebrity Couple, has the proper formatting and brings the dirty laundry out to dry next to the flambe from the bonfire of the vanities.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
