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Sometimes you can't get your way!2 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
** revised up after edits made by author **
Guessing that is Stormy on the left. FYI your last line is six syllables, not five. Letting you know before this goes to booth so you don't get DQd. Fix it and message me, and I will add back a star.
SS
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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** revised up after edits made by author **
Guessing that is Stormy on the left. FYI your last line is six syllables, not five. Letting you know before this goes to booth so you don't get DQd. Fix it and message me, and I will add back a star.
SS
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Wow! Thanks so much for your astute review, Simian. That "a" in the last line was a typo. So glad you picked it up. I fixed it.
Best,
RFL
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I figured! I have updated the rating. 🦍
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Thank you!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You've got 6 syllables in the third line (probably the errant 'a' is to blame!) Otherwise a humorous and fun entry for this political 5-7-5, complemented by a great visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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You've got 6 syllables in the third line (probably the errant 'a' is to blame!) Otherwise a humorous and fun entry for this political 5-7-5, complemented by a great visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much, Debbie, for your astute review. Yes, the "a" was a typo. I fixed it.
Best,
RFL
