I Wonder
A 5-7-5 Poem21 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It makes one wonder, doesn't it. I had to pause and think about it but didn't come up with an answer. Thank you for sharing this interesting contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
  |
It makes one wonder, doesn't it. I had to pause and think about it but didn't come up with an answer. Thank you for sharing this interesting contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
-
Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, I Wonder, has the proper formatting and suggests that mankind will likely return to the muck from whence it dragged itself from initially.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
|
This 5-7-5, I Wonder, has the proper formatting and suggests that mankind will likely return to the muck from whence it dragged itself from initially.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Bill, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Cool entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
|
Cool entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Gypsy, for your encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from harmony13
The author's poem raises a question to think about. The
words are thought provoking
descriptive and creative. I like the statement that the author placed above this poem. "In which direction are we heading". I think about this often! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
|
The author's poem raises a question to think about. The
words are thought provoking
descriptive and creative. I like the statement that the author placed above this poem. "In which direction are we heading". I think about this often! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, yes, I too think about the worlds direction, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
We should all in this life search to have knowledge and to neglected brings damage to our own souls. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I enjoyed this very much. May you have a pleasant day and a very nice week.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
|
We should all in this life search to have knowledge and to neglected brings damage to our own souls. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I enjoyed this very much. May you have a pleasant day and a very nice week.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
-
Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes, your philosophical poem really raises that question. Let's hope there is light at the end of our tunnel.
Very nice overall presentation for this contest entry. Advanced 'good luck' in the voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
|
Yes, your philosophical poem really raises that question. Let's hope there is light at the end of our tunnel.
Very nice overall presentation for this contest entry. Advanced 'good luck' in the voting.
Mark
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Mark, for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AP Apgar
Excellent 5/7/5 poem and picture presentation supporting- poems flows well and asks a good question- are we going to learn from experience or step in it one more time? Not feeling optimistic at the point!! Good job - AP
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
|
Excellent 5/7/5 poem and picture presentation supporting- poems flows well and asks a good question- are we going to learn from experience or step in it one more time? Not feeling optimistic at the point!! Good job - AP
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, AP. for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
I like the question in your 5-7-5 poem. I think your use of "tree of knowledge" could refer to the Garden of Eden where it is the forbidden tree of the "knowledge of good and evil." But if it's just of "knowledge" alone, and mankind forsakes it, we were be doomed to ignorance.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
|
I like the question in your 5-7-5 poem. I think your use of "tree of knowledge" could refer to the Garden of Eden where it is the forbidden tree of the "knowledge of good and evil." But if it's just of "knowledge" alone, and mankind forsakes it, we were be doomed to ignorance.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, to be honest I did not think about the garden of Eden, love this site, I learn something with every post, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Food for thought. You have grand ideas. Ever thought of writing science fiction? The poetry is good and the picture shines on the feeling of the poem. Karen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
|
Food for thought. You have grand ideas. Ever thought of writing science fiction? The poetry is good and the picture shines on the feeling of the poem. Karen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, I am trying/learning to write prose, I have a problem with grammar and punctuation, I have written a couple of short flash types, I will get there, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
-
:-)
Comment from Wendy G
A very good question. We have little wisdom for what we should be doing, and instead we are developing systems to make us increasingly irrelevant. A thoughtful poem, and an excellent entry for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
|
A very good question. We have little wisdom for what we should be doing, and instead we are developing systems to make us increasingly irrelevant. A thoughtful poem, and an excellent entry for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Wendy, yes, I think we all need to keep our eyes on things, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
