Her Eyes
A Nanni Poem2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I think you got the line and syllable counts correct for this contest. I enjoyed your poem, dark though it was. I liked the "black wall of cloud" line especially. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I think you got the line and syllable counts correct for this contest. I enjoyed your poem, dark though it was. I liked the "black wall of cloud" line especially. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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thank you
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Naani Poetry writing prompt. I loved the images of storm clouds being created in her eyes and an upcoming storm in their relationship. Very creative. The artwork is perfect and adds to the presentation of this piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Naani Poetry writing prompt. I loved the images of storm clouds being created in her eyes and an upcoming storm in their relationship. Very creative. The artwork is perfect and adds to the presentation of this piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
