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Make me ... water

Make me ... water

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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This is an awesome story. Water is so awesome. If there is water around I am either swimming in it or sitting beside it wishing I was swimming in it. My one regret is never having learned to snorkle. I would love to swim among the coral and see all those gorgeous fish. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A spiritual post Iza and your Mother instilled a little bit of magic inside you and having planted this seed, you have had a connection with the sea ever since, a fine post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

Comment from Liz O'Neill
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I admire your spiritual connection with water. I remember when I went on a Caribbean cruise and saw the color of that water I was amazed. Every time the sky gets that color now I yell "The water is that color. The water is that color." The only water we have around here is brown, dark brown, muddy brown and some of the lakes are a little bit green and a little blue. Well expressed.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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I am so very glad that you got to do all of these these things in your life when it comes to water and to the viewing of the various oceans around the world it sounds like you've had some wonderful adventures and I enjoyed your story very much. Have a wonderful day and God bless. Patricia .

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024

Comment from Ric Myworld
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I can feel the joy popping out of the page as I read your story. And as someone who loves the Caribbean, but not the mosquitos, I can understand your feelings more than most. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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Water is definitely your element, my mermaid friend. I hope you are enjoying your travels when you can. I also hope you get through all your classes and work so that you can go explore more water in the world.

a moment Jacque Costeau, (Jacques Cousteau)

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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I, too, find my peace with bodies of water...a river, a lake, a pond but mostly the wide open sea. I love to hear the waves slapping against the shore, playing its own tune just for me. I just returned last night and wish I could turn around and go back again. Love it!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

Comment from royowen
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Yes, we've traveled, from Asia to America to Europe and Australia, we've swum at the Great Barrier Reef, in the black in Crimea, seen the great cities of the world, but there's lots we haven't seen, and we're probably not likely to, you have grown as a writer, well done Iza, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, God loves us and He created all we see and feel. Large bodies of water are great soothers. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading. I couldn't see any way to improve it.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024