Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Is this what people do when there is an eclipse of the sun? Not sure, but it was an exciting event that many enjoyed Jake. A fun Lune for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Nicely done, Jake! Great image and imagery to honour this moment in history. Your lune poem fulfils the format of 5-3-5 and is a very worthy entry for the contest. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024

thanks as always

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

How clever to write a lune poem about the eclipse! You got the syllable count right, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024

thanks as always