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bob cullen
This is the most astonishing piece of writing I've ever come across on Fanstory. And from the wording used is, I presume penned by a tiger acquainted with all legal terminology. Which prompts one question. Where, Mr. Tiger, did you attain your legal knowledge? The law of the Jungle, holds no sway in Judicial surroundings in Australian Courtrooms. On that basis, and on that basis alone I find I must dismiss your challenge. Case dismissed.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
thanks for the review much appreciated.
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Debbie D'Arcy
Oh wow, Jake, your muse is working overtime here! I thought for a moment humanity might be saved by our defence but not to be. A grisly ending I fear. Perhaps 50000 should be (e)migrating to the Moon and Mars? Thanks for sharing (I think:)) Debbie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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