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Vermillion Evening

Haiku

2 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
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Congratulations on your first milestone post, and welcome to FanStory! You got the format of the haiku right, and I loved your use of "soul-bright." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate this feedback you have given me.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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Some well chosen words in this 5-7-5 and I could visualise the flaming red sky whilst reading your fine poem and I wish you luck with the contest and welcome you to Fanstory x x x

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Dolly, dor your lovely review and your generous score.