Northern lights
Colourful lights dance in the sky5 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
Illuminates is a brave word to use in this form. It uses up half your syllables. I like it the form is restricting in the extreme so it is hard to actually do anything other than a nice poem.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Illuminates is a brave word to use in this form. It uses up half your syllables. I like it the form is restricting in the extreme so it is hard to actually do anything other than a nice poem.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never seen the Northern Lights, but in Birmingham, UK they had a mock light show of the aurora borealis lights which was magical, you brought the excitement here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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I have never seen the Northern Lights, but in Birmingham, UK they had a mock light show of the aurora borealis lights which was magical, you brought the excitement here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you Dolly 🙂
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A good entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt. All of the criteria has been met in this poem. A lovely photograph was chosen to accompany it but there is no credit given for the piece. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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A good entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt. All of the criteria has been met in this poem. A lovely photograph was chosen to accompany it but there is no credit given for the piece. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from jessizero
I liked your 1-6-1 poem about the Northern lights. You got the syllable count and rhymes right, and your words were lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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I liked your 1-6-1 poem about the Northern lights. You got the syllable count and rhymes right, and your words were lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Ingridjo
A lovely poem, accurate to the 1-6-1 form and perfectly descriptive of the subject of the fabulous, natural phenomenon that is the spectacular northern lights..
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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A lovely poem, accurate to the 1-6-1 form and perfectly descriptive of the subject of the fabulous, natural phenomenon that is the spectacular northern lights..
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
