Wedding Day
6-Word Poem4 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I would suggest "Unwedding Day." Also, I can offer suggestions for free pictures. Bing, Google, Unsplash, and Pinterest ( the biggest) allow free use of pictures if you acknowledge them in your Author's notes.
Good Luck. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I would suggest "Unwedding Day." Also, I can offer suggestions for free pictures. Bing, Google, Unsplash, and Pinterest ( the biggest) allow free use of pictures if you acknowledge them in your Author's notes.
Good Luck. Karen
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and for your suggestions.
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:-)
Comment from jim vecchio
You told a sad tale and gave us much to ponder with such few words. Hope this is a fiction piece-wouldn't want to see you that unhappy! You are very good at short writings.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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You told a sad tale and gave us much to ponder with such few words. Hope this is a fiction piece-wouldn't want to see you that unhappy! You are very good at short writings.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
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I admire your works.
Comment from Debra White
Hello Andrea :)
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is so well written.
I love the clear imagery of the white dress yellowing over time and the pile of unsent invitations... I'm sure that both will be sat on my back burner for a good while, whilst I think about the back story! Why happened to prevent the wedding from taking place??! It's up to me to decide, I guess!
Your words really hooked me.
Good luck in the contest - a sure fire contender!
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Hello Andrea :)
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is so well written.
I love the clear imagery of the white dress yellowing over time and the pile of unsent invitations... I'm sure that both will be sat on my back burner for a good while, whilst I think about the back story! Why happened to prevent the wedding from taking place??! It's up to me to decide, I guess!
Your words really hooked me.
Good luck in the contest - a sure fire contender!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback. I'm overwhelmed with your review. I'm glad I was able to trigger an emotional reaction.
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is amazing. I gave someone 2 stars for putting a line of writing up for review and calling it poetry. I showed him what one line of poetry should look like. I could have included this in those examples this is a master class. I wish I had 6 stars left, I write more than 100 reviews a week and simply run out.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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That is amazing. I gave someone 2 stars for putting a line of writing up for review and calling it poetry. I showed him what one line of poetry should look like. I could have included this in those examples this is a master class. I wish I had 6 stars left, I write more than 100 reviews a week and simply run out.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback. I am in a place with my writing where your feedback has breathed new life into me to continue working at it. I'm just at a tough spot in one story, nothing major except I have so much I need to "fix".
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All the best with it.
