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Boys Will Be Boys

2nd Place Finish

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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LOLOL Indeed, it would be too funny not to! Great story for the 200 Word Flash writing prompt. I love kids. They will never let you down in the truth departement and they say the best stuff without ever meaning to. lol Good luck

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Marilyn. His parents were mortified. Ha!
Comment from Bobby Jo
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umh cute coming from a six year old, yes, but no. I think the adults need to step in and have a talk with the parents. that is what is wrong with this world, adults arn't steping up to the plate. My opionin anyway

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
    It was a flash. Couldn?t put the conclusion which is the parents were mortified. Turns out Taylor swift has a video/concert where she is dancing around in white bikini bottoms. According to them, he was watching this with his sisters. Oh my!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Oh dear gawd. These are the kinds of stories that are hilarious because if you made them UP, everyone would say, "Ohhh, that could never happen!" But here's proof positive it can. And does. (I'm a teacher; you would not believe how many things I've heard about children's families...that the families would die if they knew I knew.)

Hilarious 200 word flash. I hope it takes you to the Winner's Circle.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Winner?s Circle? It has been so long, I need directions. Ha! I can find the Funny Circle though.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 15-Apr-2024
    Hahaha. Way more people there anyway...and they're the kind who are fun to be around!!
Comment from jessizero
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This story was too funny! I know you know you ended the last sentence in a preposition, but to add to it would mess up your word count. Thank you for sharing this piece of fun, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you! Made me laugh, Jessi!
Comment from Julie Helms
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Out of the mouths of babes!
Funny story, and I bet there was at least one mortified parent there.

Some suggestions for your consideration:

meering (meeting)

six to seven year old group (six- to seven-year-old group)

He had mopish brown hair (moppish)

There were five instructions (instructors)

Best of luck!
Julie

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Julie! I guess you can tell I wrote this in the fly last night before I went to bed!