Rambling Thoughts
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Kitchen Mess"I write about whatever is going on in my life.
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Comment from kiwisteveh
Ha! Sounds like you are like me and can't bear to do the dishes and clean the mess after dinner. I would much rather face them with renewed energy in the morning!
small error breath --> breathe
Nicely rhymed and rhythmical piece with a lighthearted touch. Well done.
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Ha! Sounds like you are like me and can't bear to do the dishes and clean the mess after dinner. I would much rather face them with renewed energy in the morning!
small error breath --> breathe
Nicely rhymed and rhythmical piece with a lighthearted touch. Well done.
Steve
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Most definitely. After all the work of cooking and eating, I want to relax, not work more. Thank you for reviewing and for pointing out my error.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Hey! Who's been sneaking into my kitchen and taking pictures? lol Very creative and humorous poem. Something the majority of women can relate to. And here is a little secret that I have learned. As I get older and the meals I cook are fewer and fewer, I would give anything to have a sink full of dishes again. :-) Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Hey! Who's been sneaking into my kitchen and taking pictures? lol Very creative and humorous poem. Something the majority of women can relate to. And here is a little secret that I have learned. As I get older and the meals I cook are fewer and fewer, I would give anything to have a sink full of dishes again. :-) Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you. My adult son and his roommate live with me, but I know exactly what you mean. I miss my kids being little.