Springtime Love
The perfect time to express feelings.3 total reviews
Comment from Taylor Silvers
It's very nice, I do like the background. And your syllables are on point. I don't think there's a balance between spring and romance. It's two lines about spring and one about romance. That's just my opinion though. It's still great.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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It's very nice, I do like the background. And your syllables are on point. I don't think there's a balance between spring and romance. It's two lines about spring and one about romance. That's just my opinion though. It's still great.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you again for the honor. Next time I need to think more about the balance.
Comment from kiwisteveh
It's Autumn here. Do I have to put my romantic impulses on hold?
Just joking. This is a pretty 5-7-5 poem and of course Spring is the time when our thoughts turn to love.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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It's Autumn here. Do I have to put my romantic impulses on hold?
Just joking. This is a pretty 5-7-5 poem and of course Spring is the time when our thoughts turn to love.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Hey, never hold back. I believe autumn can have its own incentives sparked by the changing of colors. Kind of a signal to get going before the cold sets in. Thanks for the read and the feedback. Romance in any season is good, don't you think?
Comment from jessizero
This poem had a soft feel to it, and it was definitely romantic. You got the syllable count right, too. Thank you so much for sharing your poem, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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This poem had a soft feel to it, and it was definitely romantic. You got the syllable count right, too. Thank you so much for sharing your poem, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks for read and feedback. Happy Spring!
