Watching..
titillating thoughts2 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
Erotic 5-7-5 Don't see many of those.
Clever use of internal rhyme in each of the three lines is an added feature here.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Erotic 5-7-5 Don't see many of those.
Clever use of internal rhyme in each of the three lines is an added feature here.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I do try to offer something different to spice up things.
I appreciate you reading and reviewing.
Comment from Mark Jackson
Very good. What else can I say? I liked the internal rhyme with Grow and Beau. The enjambment onto the last line works. It does make me think of what the ebb and flow is as it is separated from the rest of the poem. Good work 5 stars.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Very good. What else can I say? I liked the internal rhyme with Grow and Beau. The enjambment onto the last line works. It does make me think of what the ebb and flow is as it is separated from the rest of the poem. Good work 5 stars.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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I do have a vivid imagination..but the ebb and flow reminds me of
a man thrusting. (biggrin).
And GROW refers to the thrust that speed up ( biggrin )
Glad you like the rhyme!
