Wisdom
Something I wish to be able to do.35 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, Beth, to learn the truth and develop skills to recognize lies is a sure-proof way toward wisdom of the highest degree. I love this message and noticed you won third place in a contest so I wanted to read what you had to say about wisdom. Well said and a good idea!
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Yes, Beth, to learn the truth and develop skills to recognize lies is a sure-proof way toward wisdom of the highest degree. I love this message and noticed you won third place in a contest so I wanted to read what you had to say about wisdom. Well said and a good idea!
Jesse
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thank you, Jesse. I appreciate you reading and commenting on this.
Beth
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You're welcome, Beth.
Jesse
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Beth,
This senryu gives good life advice. Especially in this technological world we need to be able to find lies in more places now.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Have a great week
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Hi Beth,
This senryu gives good life advice. Especially in this technological world we need to be able to find lies in more places now.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Have a great week
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you Joan. I appreciate you review of this and your congratulations.
Beth
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You're welcome on both account, Beth.
Joan
Comment from EeanBlack
Wow, I was lied to for thirty-two years. The truth was liberating because it not only freed me it freed my creative soul. I'm a work in progress. lol
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Wow, I was lied to for thirty-two years. The truth was liberating because it not only freed me it freed my creative soul. I'm a work in progress. lol
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Lies are everywhere. Truth is liberating. Thanks for great review.
Beth
Comment from ElPoetry001
Writing is like a map. Open it up and find the State you are looking for.
Disregard any information that doesn't assist you in reaching your destination.
Determine how far it is from where you start.
Too basic?
Many articles are strictly subjective. You opened the article based on "click-bait."
Ok, where is the guide for verification?
Although writing is not a religious ritual, "confirmation," is.
The used car salesman said: "The Air-conditioning is ice cold."
I said: "Why are you telling me this? I am trying to buy a Harley Davidson motorcycle."
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Writing is like a map. Open it up and find the State you are looking for.
Disregard any information that doesn't assist you in reaching your destination.
Determine how far it is from where you start.
Too basic?
Many articles are strictly subjective. You opened the article based on "click-bait."
Ok, where is the guide for verification?
Although writing is not a religious ritual, "confirmation," is.
The used car salesman said: "The Air-conditioning is ice cold."
I said: "Why are you telling me this? I am trying to buy a Harley Davidson motorcycle."
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for an interesting review. When you are writing with so few words you have no choice but to disregard anything that doesn't apply. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
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Stay well.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Wise words to live by. We all need to acquire these skills and put them to use. The message you send works well in this 5-7-5 poem. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Wise words to live by. We all need to acquire these skills and put them to use. The message you send works well in this 5-7-5 poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you Ginda. I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from bob cullen
Perhaps you should commence providing lessons in this subject. We could all do with this type of knowledge come election times. Politicians are masters in truth manipulation.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Perhaps you should commence providing lessons in this subject. We could all do with this type of knowledge come election times. Politicians are masters in truth manipulation.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you Bob. I couldn't give lessons because I want to learn how to do this myself. Thanks for the review and comments.
Beth
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Wisdom, has the proper formatting and reminds us that sometimes people don't lie, but are wrong. The hard one is know if they actually know better.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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This 5-7-5, Wisdom, has the proper formatting and reminds us that sometimes people don't lie, but are wrong. The hard one is know if they actually know better.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you Bill. Some people just pass along what they hear without bothering to check to see if they might be passing on lies without knowing it.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent 5-7-5, meeting the requirements and beautifully presented. That is the sort of wisdom much needed in today's world - to both discern truth, and be able to recognise lies, which really include anything less than the whole truth, for even partial truth or lies mixed with truth shows intent to deceive. Best wishes fr your cleverly-written entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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An excellent 5-7-5, meeting the requirements and beautifully presented. That is the sort of wisdom much needed in today's world - to both discern truth, and be able to recognise lies, which really include anything less than the whole truth, for even partial truth or lies mixed with truth shows intent to deceive. Best wishes fr your cleverly-written entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much Wendy. I enjoyed reading you nice review.
Beth
Comment from royowen
Yes the Lord said, be as gentle as a dove, but as wise a serpent. Which is the way we should be, this is great wisdom, it seems so obvious and simple but it's not. Beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Yes the Lord said, be as gentle as a dove, but as wise a serpent. Which is the way we should be, this is great wisdom, it seems so obvious and simple but it's not. Beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you Roy, I appreciate you lovely review and commernts.
Beth
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Most welcome
Comment from GoWiSt
Wow! Nice complementary picture art choice.
Successfully met the line and syllable count requirements for this 5-7-5 poem contest.
Wouldn't it be great if we could somehow extra-sensorily discern truths and lies from people's words--or just by simply looking at them? LOL
Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Wow! Nice complementary picture art choice.
Successfully met the line and syllable count requirements for this 5-7-5 poem contest.
Wouldn't it be great if we could somehow extra-sensorily discern truths and lies from people's words--or just by simply looking at them? LOL
Good luck!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and comments.
Beth
