Lessons of Life
Life is one big lesson26 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Yes, sometimes people may do the right thing with their decision, and then for some reason known only to them have egg on their place by doing something foolish, beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Yes, sometimes people may do the right thing with their decision, and then for some reason known only to them have egg on their place by doing something foolish, beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Bless you for always being insightful, Roy.
Thank you for your words!
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Well done
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You are right this is very true. Your 5/7/5 poem is one that many readers, including myself, can understand. This has the correct syllable count and the picture matches perfectly. Great job. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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You are right this is very true. Your 5/7/5 poem is one that many readers, including myself, can understand. This has the correct syllable count and the picture matches perfectly. Great job. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Alexandra. You wrote such nice comments...Blessings...
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You're welcome, LoAnn.. Blessings, too!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A very good opening line.
-The second line supports that very well
because we have to do our part in order to learn.
-You make a good point in the last line
that is also important.
-A good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A very good opening line.
-The second line supports that very well
because we have to do our part in order to learn.
-You make a good point in the last line
that is also important.
-A good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your insight and kind words.I appreciate your reading it and writing about it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from karenina
Great point. How many of us have had to relearn the same lesson over and over? It have! This is an appealing 5-7-5 that makes a great point!
(I wish I was a faster learner...)
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Great point. How many of us have had to relearn the same lesson over and over? It have! This is an appealing 5-7-5 that makes a great point!
(I wish I was a faster learner...)
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Oh Karenina, I'm slow,too, so the idea popped up, LOL. Thanks so much.
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You're welcome. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent artwork and presentation to this 5/7/5 lesson of life poem. The key is definitely to remember what we've learned and the remember. There in lies the rub.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Excellent artwork and presentation to this 5/7/5 lesson of life poem. The key is definitely to remember what we've learned and the remember. There in lies the rub.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Janet, that's it. Some lessons are harder than others, aren't they? Blessings
Comment from Shanbreen
These type of short poems makes me impatient to go straight to the punch line. Yes, using what we learn is the keystone to any type of learning, and you portray it well.
Wish you the best for the contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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These type of short poems makes me impatient to go straight to the punch line. Yes, using what we learn is the keystone to any type of learning, and you portray it well.
Wish you the best for the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for your comments...and thank you for wishing me luck.
Comment from LJbutterfly
If a curious baby touches a hot iron, he will only do it once. Life teaches us from the day we are born. By the time we reach middle-age, most of us have accumulated lots of wisdom. Your creative poem makes it clear that we must learn and remember. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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If a curious baby touches a hot iron, he will only do it once. Life teaches us from the day we are born. By the time we reach middle-age, most of us have accumulated lots of wisdom. Your creative poem makes it clear that we must learn and remember. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I love your name and loved your sweet comments...thank so very much.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Life often teaches us lessons. I raised four sons. One of them, my stinker, I swear needed to be kicked in the head by the mule fifty times before he released that mule kicks. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Life often teaches us lessons. I raised four sons. One of them, my stinker, I swear needed to be kicked in the head by the mule fifty times before he released that mule kicks. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Oh, you made me giggle....I had one of those! Thanks so much!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
A great reminder of how life is the ultimate teacher, if only we would sit still and listen. And of course, remember, as you point out in the great little 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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A great reminder of how life is the ultimate teacher, if only we would sit still and listen. And of course, remember, as you point out in the great little 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Ginda, There is a song about listening...and I got the idea...and remembered it as I wrote it. Bless you for your insight.
Comment from Lisasview
Yes, this so very true Lo Ann.... first being open to learning and then hoping what has been learned is remembered.
Enjoyed the read.
Lisasview now living in Spain
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Yes, this so very true Lo Ann.... first being open to learning and then hoping what has been learned is remembered.
Enjoyed the read.
Lisasview now living in Spain
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for writing. I am glad I remembered to thank you, or I would have blown my point....LOL
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You are very welcome
