The joy of life
A children's poem2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An uplifting post Shavon, and I enjoyed the sentiment and the rhymes, the introduction of internal metre would help your poem flow, love Dolly x x x x
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An uplifting post Shavon, and I enjoyed the sentiment and the rhymes, the introduction of internal metre would help your poem flow, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from papa55mike
Something different, a happy poem! We don't see them often enough and need more. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Something different, a happy poem! We don't see them often enough and need more. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
