Rambling Thoughts
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Real Friends"I write about whatever is going on in my life.
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Comment from patcelaw
I like this I'm very much about friendships. I am usually one who is not too fond of poetry that does not have punctuation marks, but in your particular poem here you have put spaces between the various thoughts of the poem and that acts like punctuation marks for me. Have a good day. May God bless you. Patricia .
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
I like this I'm very much about friendships. I am usually one who is not too fond of poetry that does not have punctuation marks, but in your particular poem here you have put spaces between the various thoughts of the poem and that acts like punctuation marks for me. Have a good day. May God bless you. Patricia .
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thanks!!! I appreciate your review. I used to put lots of punctuation in my poems, but I was told it was too much, so now I may be erring on the other side - lol.
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The reason I have a problem with not having punctuation and a poem or in an art article is that I have to rely on AI to read the poems and articles for me so that I can understand them. My vision is extremely poor.
Comment from zanya
How interesting to read a poem devoted to the wonderful world of friendship-that which makes the world go round; among other things of course. The second last couplet really portrays the reality of friendship.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
How interesting to read a poem devoted to the wonderful world of friendship-that which makes the world go round; among other things of course. The second last couplet really portrays the reality of friendship.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you! I have found some wonderful friends through this site, as well as through writing to pen pals, so I am thankful.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your rhymes and your message. True friends are rare. My sister is my best friend, but she can't exactly leave me. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
I enjoyed your rhymes and your message. True friends are rare. My sister is my best friend, but she can't exactly leave me. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you! My best friends have been found through writing letters to pen pals and through this site.