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Seven Reasons Marines Exist

3rd Place Finish

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This acrostic poem, Seven Reasons Marines Exist, presented with the vertical main --MARINES, hits me where I live. From the Rifleman's Creed to the Marines' Hymn I will always remember the feeling of being part of the best.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Devil Dog! I think you bumped me onto the winner's podium as well. You will carry the title of US Marine with you always. No one can ever take it away!
    Semper Fi!
Comment from Julie Helms
Excellent
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Good military humor! Well-done acrostic, original, and good picture to match.
One suggestion:
Since the subject is 'Marines', I'd change your first word to 'make'
Marines... make enemies of the US sweat

Julie
(An army brat)
:-)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    Thank you! Just having a little fun.
reply by Julie Helms on 21-Apr-2024
    Ha! It was you! Congrats on the 3rd place finish. Shoulda been 1st. I voted for you :-)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Well, thank you! I like to give my beloved Corps a shout out every now and then!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent
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Excellent, your acrostic here does poke a bit of fun towards other defenses, though it is wonderfully done, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    Thank you! Just having a little fun!