Quotes
Catch as many as you can.3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Not really sure what your well-written 5-7-5 has to do with human emotion... however, it is certainly a unique life instruction. ;-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Not really sure what your well-written 5-7-5 has to do with human emotion... however, it is certainly a unique life instruction. ;-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I always enjoy finding quotes to write about or share.
-A very good opening line.
-You make a good point about the result in line two.
-I like you concluding line, as well.
-A good entry.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I always enjoy finding quotes to write about or share.
-A very good opening line.
-You make a good point about the result in line two.
-I like you concluding line, as well.
-A good entry.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Suggestion added. Thank you for your help and review!
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You are very welcome. I updated the comments in the review.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent senryu for the contest with the 5-7-5 form
Quotes are often insightful and a great help in dealing life's problem.
Persevere is one of the best pieces of advice.
Things change slowly, but they do change.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent senryu for the contest with the 5-7-5 form
Quotes are often insightful and a great help in dealing life's problem.
Persevere is one of the best pieces of advice.
Things change slowly, but they do change.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you! I hope I win first place!
