Papi
I'm learning to see him through the eyes that he gave me.2 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
This would be better if you explained the requirements in the notes, I did look them up. It hits the count and I liked the words, not sure I understood why you would need to fight someone in the first place. I am also perplexed as to why the font changes at the end. If anything I would suggest the final words should be bigger and bolder.
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This would be better if you explained the requirements in the notes, I did look them up. It hits the count and I liked the words, not sure I understood why you would need to fight someone in the first place. I am also perplexed as to why the font changes at the end. If anything I would suggest the final words should be bigger and bolder.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
Comment from jessizero
I like the way you formatted that last line to emphasize "he could fly." The poem itself was touching. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I like the way you formatted that last line to emphasize "he could fly." The poem itself was touching. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
