Thieves Never Prosper
guilt and consequences4 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is adorable and with a biblical warning inside. I came back to review after voting. Best of the bumch, talented writer. Sending you my best today as always and my good good wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))
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This is adorable and with a biblical warning inside. I came back to review after voting. Best of the bumch, talented writer. Sending you my best today as always and my good good wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hahaha. Cute picture that match your words just right.
Years ago, a piano student of mine was getting her end-of-lesson candy (well, it has to be a GOOD lesson in order to get the candy...), the rule for which is "one piece of candy for each talented hand." I wasn't watching her; I was busy putting things away and getting ready to leave. At the door, she handed me one piece of candy and said, "Here. By mistake I took three." "Oh, thank you for being so honest," I told her. She said, "If I'd eaten it, it would've tasted like guilt." Your poem evoked that delightful memory.
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Hahaha. Cute picture that match your words just right.
Years ago, a piano student of mine was getting her end-of-lesson candy (well, it has to be a GOOD lesson in order to get the candy...), the rule for which is "one piece of candy for each talented hand." I wasn't watching her; I was busy putting things away and getting ready to leave. At the door, she handed me one piece of candy and said, "Here. By mistake I took three." "Oh, thank you for being so honest," I told her. She said, "If I'd eaten it, it would've tasted like guilt." Your poem evoked that delightful memory.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the mouse poem contest
with very good rhymes and a clever ending.
Reading Crime and Punishment could be a never ending
task for the mouse.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent entry for the mouse poem contest
with very good rhymes and a clever ending.
Reading Crime and Punishment could be a never ending
task for the mouse.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you! These small verse contests allow me to have some fun!
Comment from Bridge
I really enjoyed your poem. I especially love the picture of the mouse. Crime and Punishment is a difficult book to tackle . Very well written. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I really enjoyed your poem. I especially love the picture of the mouse. Crime and Punishment is a difficult book to tackle . Very well written. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words!
