Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Sorry dove for the pain.
It flows so ever so...
Yes, but there's a rainbow that Eye can see.
A double rainbow from all your rain pains.
Well presented my friend.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Dear Ricky, thank you for your comments and review. Dove

reply by Ricky1024 on 22-Apr-2024

My pleasure

reply by Ricky1024 on 22-Apr-2024

My pleasure

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem very much. I am sorry that you're feeling pain in your heart, but just know that when we have gloomy weather, our heartache seems to be worse than when it's sunny. Keep your spirits up and just know that God will take care of this for you. God bless. Patricia .

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

HI Patricia, thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

Congratulations to you on fulfilling the criteria of a cinquain perfectly. I'm sorry that you have been suffering lately. Your poem touches the heart. Very well expressed. I hope you find yourself in a happier place soon. Wishing you the best in your future endeavours
With kind regards

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Dear Bridge, thank you for your comments and review. Dove