An Ocean of Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Thirsty Trees"NaPoWriMo contest entry
2 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
I enjoyed that the words are few but well chosen. The picture adds a little something but takes nothing away from the imagination. Perfectly nice little Lune.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed that the words are few but well chosen. The picture adds a little something but takes nothing away from the imagination. Perfectly nice little Lune.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Dear Mark, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Traditional NaPoWriMo contest. This is a nice Lune poem bringing trees to life. I love rainy days also and like to imagine that the world is being refreshed. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Traditional NaPoWriMo contest. This is a nice Lune poem bringing trees to life. I love rainy days also and like to imagine that the world is being refreshed. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Dear Marilyn, thank you for your comments and review and good luck wishes. Dove
