Look Deeper
Monostich with a message3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have two votes.
Your poem makes a point and like you applied it to a poem in your notes.
Van Gogh is one of my all time favourite painters , he applied thick paint "impasto" to the canvas that gave a sense of motion and much emotion to his work.
Vincent's brush strokes tell us much about him and his moods while he was painting.
My mother was a painter ( and sculptor) and she used a palette knife at times. My favourite was a close up of a bull and the torero .. it seemed alive and I could feel all the drama of the moment.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Ciao poet, you now have two votes.
Your poem makes a point and like you applied it to a poem in your notes.
Van Gogh is one of my all time favourite painters , he applied thick paint "impasto" to the canvas that gave a sense of motion and much emotion to his work.
Vincent's brush strokes tell us much about him and his moods while he was painting.
My mother was a painter ( and sculptor) and she used a palette knife at times. My favourite was a close up of a bull and the torero .. it seemed alive and I could feel all the drama of the moment.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much.
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At times our first impression of someone is negative but if we take the time and effort to look more closely , we could be surprised to find things about that person that we actually like. 😐
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well said! A lovely abstract painting with a resonating message! Your metaphor could also apply to life in general, avoiding blanket dismissals of people and situations. An impressive entry for the monostich. No errors noted:)) Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Well said! A lovely abstract painting with a resonating message! Your metaphor could also apply to life in general, avoiding blanket dismissals of people and situations. An impressive entry for the monostich. No errors noted:)) Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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I think I might have used the word metaphor, it should perhaps have been allegory. Thank you for the review.
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Or analogy? But I'm quite happy with metaphor (rightly or wrongly)
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Oh, may be yes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated and you
make some good points in them.
-A well written monstich with a good topic.
-A very good message about how to
appreciate something that is artistic.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated and you
make some good points in them.
-A well written monstich with a good topic.
-A very good message about how to
appreciate something that is artistic.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
