Moonlit Shore
5/7/5 Poem4 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Beautifully written and presented, your words enhance the image of serenity, it is so peaceful sitting by the ocean and just listening to the waves, a deserved win, congratulations****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
Beautifully written and presented, your words enhance the image of serenity, it is so peaceful sitting by the ocean and just listening to the waves, a deserved win, congratulations****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank You
Comment from Mark D. R.
Really a terrific overall presentation. Even like your font choice.
Instead of comma after your middle line, consider a long dash or squiggle.
Each line is perfectly crafted.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
Really a terrific overall presentation. Even like your font choice.
Instead of comma after your middle line, consider a long dash or squiggle.
Each line is perfectly crafted.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you, I will have a look.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with the tranquil feel of moonlight on a quiet sea.
If only the world itself were so calm and reassuring.
Nicely done with wonderful art work.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with the tranquil feel of moonlight on a quiet sea.
If only the world itself were so calm and reassuring.
Nicely done with wonderful art work.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you, the artwork was a bit too rough but the best I could find without breaching copyright.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt. I enjoyed the personification of the waves and the night in this poem. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt. I enjoyed the personification of the waves and the night in this poem. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you.