Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

Thank you for entering my contest Tanka, I was unsure if this one would be popular. Each entry is like a gift to me. I get tired of endless requests for 5-7-5 poetry, so I thought I would ask for just a little bit more. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Oh, thank you so much for the great review! It was a fun writing prompt to do!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Mother Nature is what I was thinking when I read that first line. You did a great job describing Mother Nature in Spring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for the nice review!

Comment from playinaround

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. So very clever. To paint a picture of Lady Mother Nature and describe spring at the same time beautifully done. I love it!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for the great review!