Rough Night
Rising from a dead sleep11 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I can relate to your poem. I think I spent last week being the real life version of your poem.
Best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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I can relate to your poem. I think I spent last week being the real life version of your poem.
Best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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LOL! Thanks so I much!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Sure feels like that sometimes... :-) Thank you so much for sharing your 5-7-5 take on this 'unique' prompt and best of luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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LOL! Sure feels like that sometimes... :-) Thank you so much for sharing your 5-7-5 take on this 'unique' prompt and best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much--tied for 1st!
Comment from jaded831
You made me laugh before coffee, at the moment I feel like the walking dead. I found your poem made zombies likable and human like. Glad to see your at the top. I hope you win.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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You made me laugh before coffee, at the moment I feel like the walking dead. I found your poem made zombies likable and human like. Glad to see your at the top. I hope you win.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thanks again for the kind words & lovely rating. Tied for 1st!
Comment from GoWiSt
Geez, where did you find that pic of my ex? :-)
Successfully met the line and syllable count requirements for this 'Zombie 5-7-5' poetry contest.
Well, if that's how you look when you rise from bed, then I'd hate to see you when you're worn out and exhausted. LOL
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Geez, where did you find that pic of my ex? :-)
Successfully met the line and syllable count requirements for this 'Zombie 5-7-5' poetry contest.
Well, if that's how you look when you rise from bed, then I'd hate to see you when you're worn out and exhausted. LOL
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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LOL! Thanks so much!
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this poetry contest. Yes, I think most of us rising first thing in the morning could lay claim to obtaining a starring role in a zombie movie, good job, good kuck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry in this poetry contest. Yes, I think most of us rising first thing in the morning could lay claim to obtaining a starring role in a zombie movie, good job, good kuck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much!
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Welcome
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is a bit different rather than focusing on a zombie itself you use it as a metaphor for you on an early morning or after a late night. I feel this will help you stand out when it comes to voting on the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This is a bit different rather than focusing on a zombie itself you use it as a metaphor for you on an early morning or after a late night. I feel this will help you stand out when it comes to voting on the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I love the humour here and we all look a a bit rough in the morning, but this is taking it to the next level, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Ha ha ha, I love the humour here and we all look a a bit rough in the morning, but this is taking it to the next level, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
As they say whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. So this is a very funny zombie poem and did a good job with the challenge. Still if you're waking up and getting out of bed in the morning; it doesn't matter what you look like. It just matters that you're still alive.
Best wishes,
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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As they say whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. So this is a very funny zombie poem and did a good job with the challenge. Still if you're waking up and getting out of bed in the morning; it doesn't matter what you look like. It just matters that you're still alive.
Best wishes,
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Very true! Thanks so much!
Comment from jessizero
This whole thing is hilarious! I liked your poem, and the accompanying picture was great. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This whole thing is hilarious! I liked your poem, and the accompanying picture was great. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Ahhh...I see you went for the humor aspect of the contest.
Well done. This one has legs...unless you ate them. Ha! Sorry, that was weak.
Good job and good luck!
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Ahhh...I see you went for the humor aspect of the contest.
Well done. This one has legs...unless you ate them. Ha! Sorry, that was weak.
Good job and good luck!
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much! LOL!