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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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From your notes it seems skating is certainly a favourite family passtime, and with romantic overtures. I'm sure the fun you had was worth the bruises, Debbie. Also your title's missing a t.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    When I was younger and took skating a lot more seriously and bruises a lot less seriously, we used to say that it wasn?t a good session unless you fell. Nowadays, it?s not like that. Lol I don?t care if I learn a new jump or a new spin or a new whatever. I just don?t wanna look like an idiot idiot and embarrass my family. Lol don?t know if I?ll ever go again, but it was a great time.
    Thanks so much for reading and pointing out the missing tea. 😊M blessings,
    Deb
Comment from Ric Myworld
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It took me a minute to realize what a Skae Date was from your title. LOL. It's always fun to get out do those things we remember has fun, and especially when we get to do them with the grand kids. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    oh my goodness! I didn?t realize I goofed the title. Blind people in cell phones? What are you gonna do with us. Lol I will fix it and do appreciate your point it out. I used to spin and dance and do jumps? But I could go forward and backward still so I feel like that?s a win. 😊
    Blessings,
    Deb
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This sounds like a fun day with the grandkids.( I think you're missing a word at the end of the first line of the final stanza.) I can picture your husband tackling you to keep you from skating. Mine would do the same! I'm glad you weren't injured. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    hi, Carol!
    That?s a couple of bruises for a day like that? 😊 I don?t know if the kids will remember it forever, but I will. I used to spin and dance and do jumps? But I managed to go forward and backwards, so it?s pretty happy with myself. It was turning from backward to forward when I fell. I just can?t quite remember that move. Or maybe I?m just not as flexible as once I was. Lol I?m glad you enjoyed and appreciate you pointing out the boo-boo. M
    Bless
    Deb
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this NaPoWruNo Contest entry 22 with us. It was fun to read. So cute!!!

"Come skate with us, "our grandkids said.
My husband grounded, "will end up dead! " (TRY -
"Come skate with us," our grandkids said.
My husband grounded, "Will end up dead!")

"I'm not scared, "I said and grinned. (TRY -
"I'm not scared," I said and grinned.)


 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Barbara. No one else pointed these out and I appreciate the help very much. I?m definitely learning a new skill. Evidently, not very quickly. Lol I am glad you enjoyed the little poem, though.
    Blessings and hugs,
    Deb
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fun post as we all love skating if we can stay upright, of course it can also be dangerous as we are prone to injury!

Suggestion for this line for the sake of spelling:
(we'll) end up dead!)

Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Dolly, for showing me a boo-boo! 😊 I always say something like, "blind people! What are you gonna do with us? "And mean it is a joke but sometimes? Lol it?s pretty tough on an iPhone, but I?m getting the hang of it, I think. I?m gonna go back and fix the goofs and really do appreciate you.
    BlessM Deb
Comment from lyenochka
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You're so daring and apparently, skating is in your genes! It's easy to get injured in that sport but you showed that active grandmas can still do it!
Suggestions - up to you:
"will end up dead! " (We'll)
But I wouldn't trade it for the world--
The skate with my grand boys and girl. (To skate with...)

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Thank you, sweetie. It?s really tough doing this on the iPhone, but I?m figuring it out. I so appreciate you catching my goose and blunders. And that word suggestion is perfect. I always appreciate your insight and your input.
    Blessing, and hugs, Deb