Cakation
Cake my own mind up!6 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Shirley,
Welcome back to Fanstory. Congrats on the first place win in the Cake Nonsense Contest. This creative write captures the joy of baking and the eager anticipation of enjoying the first bite of a newly baked cake. The last two verses remind me of the story of the Gingerbread Man. The humor shines through and brought a bright smile to my face while reading this sweet entry.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Shirley,
Welcome back to Fanstory. Congrats on the first place win in the Cake Nonsense Contest. This creative write captures the joy of baking and the eager anticipation of enjoying the first bite of a newly baked cake. The last two verses remind me of the story of the Gingerbread Man. The humor shines through and brought a bright smile to my face while reading this sweet entry.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Eugene :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent! Loved the story and the flow to your verse. And how could anyone blame this little beauty for making a dash for it with those little "cakey feet?" Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Excellent! Loved the story and the flow to your verse. And how could anyone blame this little beauty for making a dash for it with those little "cakey feet?" Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. I have saved one sweet cake from a culinary fate so I'll sleep well tonight! :)
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This sounds like a cake from Wonderland. One Alice might have to chase.
But it is good that the cake can save itself from being eaten.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hi
This sounds like a cake from Wonderland. One Alice might have to chase.
But it is good that the cake can save itself from being eaten.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Joan :)
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You're very welcome.
Joan
Comment from zanya
This is a fun read for the Cakation contest from the cake's perspective, so to speak, with its 'golden brown' coat and 'springy head'- and a super pic to illustrate- a candidate for the winner's enclosure
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is a fun read for the Cakation contest from the cake's perspective, so to speak, with its 'golden brown' coat and 'springy head'- and a super pic to illustrate- a candidate for the winner's enclosure
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Zanya!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was so fun! I love your use of imagery and language. Great word choices such as "podgy fingers" and "cakey feet". For me it added charm to your short story. Your poem captures a sense of fun and mischief! I love how you you turn a simple baking scenario into an entertaining tale of escape!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This was so fun! I love your use of imagery and language. Great word choices such as "podgy fingers" and "cakey feet". For me it added charm to your short story. Your poem captures a sense of fun and mischief! I love how you you turn a simple baking scenario into an entertaining tale of escape!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Michael :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious, I loved the picture and your words made me smile as we all love cake and never think about the cake having feelings! Ha ha ha, this is a lot of fun, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This is hilarious, I loved the picture and your words made me smile as we all love cake and never think about the cake having feelings! Ha ha ha, this is a lot of fun, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Wow, Dolly! Thank you so much.
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You are most welcome x x x
