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Daily Dose of Vitamin D

six word contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Ciao poet! You now have two votes.

Before creating holes in the ozone one could stay out at pleasure but now short doses are warranted and only at certain times of the day

The good new is that they are repairing and closing.

I love :
the idea ,

usually: it's warm , bright are the aspects people mention when talking about the sun,
so I love this different angle

Love the beautiful art choice too

Best of luck !

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Thanks for your confidence in this contest entry. May the sun smile on you.
reply by tempeste on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you Marco ..

    I really need some warmer weather ☀️

    We still had 3C this morning.🥶
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
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This is an excellent six word poem for the contest
with a nod to nature and the impact of the sun on health.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Thanks Robert!

    Looking forward to today?s Vitamin D fix.
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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This was a good point about sunlight and vitamin D. You got the word count right, and your poem was succinct. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Thanks. Today, Earth Day, is one of those Vitamin D moments.