A Lifetime
Your life is but a story3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is leading me to think of the many lifetimes we've lived hit or miss whatever the lesson was that we wanted to learn. I sometimes say I don't want to ever I don't want to keep doing this and then I realize well if I don't work it through I'll be doing it in another life time. I don't know if that's what you had in mind but I say hit or miss.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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This is leading me to think of the many lifetimes we've lived hit or miss whatever the lesson was that we wanted to learn. I sometimes say I don't want to ever I don't want to keep doing this and then I realize well if I don't work it through I'll be doing it in another life time. I don't know if that's what you had in mind but I say hit or miss.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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This is a wonderful view of my piece. I thought about how you need to go through it to live a full life, but if you don't, you are right. It will follow you until you deal with it.
Comment from patcelaw
A written to line poem for the contest, I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May God bless you and may you have a good evening and a good week. Patricia .
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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A written to line poem for the contest, I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May God bless you and may you have a good evening and a good week. Patricia .
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
I liked both your main poem and the continued version. The main piece has the required internal and ending rhymes, and it made me think. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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I liked both your main poem and the continued version. The main piece has the required internal and ending rhymes, and it made me think. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you
