Poetic Calamity
About Hard Times5 total reviews
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This is so awesome! With the rhyming, it sounds like a rap. I love the meaning in this too. Also, welcome to Fanstory! Thanks for sharing this poem with us here!
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This is so awesome! With the rhyming, it sounds like a rap. I love the meaning in this too. Also, welcome to Fanstory! Thanks for sharing this poem with us here!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
Comment from Bryce 1
Honestly, I related to this heavily. The last line seems right from the ego. Our poetry does not need to be seen. It will be seen by some and for the most that go without viewing it, they'll be just fine. I say that only to remind myself of that, lol. Truly loved this poem.
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Honestly, I related to this heavily. The last line seems right from the ego. Our poetry does not need to be seen. It will be seen by some and for the most that go without viewing it, they'll be just fine. I say that only to remind myself of that, lol. Truly loved this poem.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
I like it a good read. A lot to like in here is some alliteration a rhyme that just appeared spontaneously out of free verse, not a crime. I do suggest that you remove your title and name from the body, to me it just looks messy as it already appears above in big bold print. Good luck in the contest.
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I like it a good read. A lot to like in here is some alliteration a rhyme that just appeared spontaneously out of free verse, not a crime. I do suggest that you remove your title and name from the body, to me it just looks messy as it already appears above in big bold print. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Is this about someone with an addiction? Not sure, but it sounds like this person is suffering in some way. We have our challenges in life and we have to remain strong in the battle, I wish you luck with the contest and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x
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Is this about someone with an addiction? Not sure, but it sounds like this person is suffering in some way. We have our challenges in life and we have to remain strong in the battle, I wish you luck with the contest and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
Comment from mermaids
You have a strong steady beat in your words with a strong rhythm. Excellent rhyming of words and I like how your poem is to the right, it adds to the strength of your them. Yes, the quiet ones are often the poets, so true to life.
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You have a strong steady beat in your words with a strong rhythm. Excellent rhyming of words and I like how your poem is to the right, it adds to the strength of your them. Yes, the quiet ones are often the poets, so true to life.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
